Thursday, 5 May 2011

Relationships!!

Where were you??

I was there when u needed help... I was there when you were depressed... I was there when you were simply bored... I sat by you when you needed a shoulder to cry on, I was the one to rely on. I was there in the toughest of times...

Guess What?? I went through the same... I looked, I searched, I cried & I wondered... it’s the least I could expect... WHERE WERE YOU?? WHERE WERE YOU??

I heard people make up stories about you, sick & demented... I stood by you... I fought them off. I wept when you were hurt. I prayed for you to be ok...

Guess What?? They did it to me too.. I hoped you would come. I hoped you would fight. I wished for a prayer... WHERE WERE YOU?? WHERE WERE YOU??

You needed space, you had a new found life, you wanted to have fun, and you wanted to change everything around you... I understood... I stayed away... I wished you luck... I gave you space...

No more guesses... I wanted it too... You never understood...  you didn’t wish me luck... nor did you care. What hurt me most of all is that you too called me names... WHERE WERE YOU?? WHERE WERE YOU??

I always hope the best, I will always care, I love you so much & keep you in my prayer...

WHERE ARE YOU?? WHERE ARE YOU??

31 comments:

  1. OMG!!! Amazingly written..... Very true...... pls keep goin wid ur hard wrk Pavi.... really a very good one.... I hope thr is a lot more to come.......

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  2. i donno wat to say... i 'm really surprised n awestuck...

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  3. perfectly true.....thoughts dat came across my mind as well bt i never knew how 2 express dem......awesome job

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  4. well done pavi... i liked it... its very nice.... keep on writing... :):):)

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  5. its awesome ... it was like reading my own story ... you can really express well .. keep writing .. wish you gud luck

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  6. NO WORDS!! absolutely amazing..!! keep it goin...
    feel lik sayin more bout dis... bt may b nt here... great work...!!!

    write ur heart out... n ppl will knw wat pavi is actually :)

    GOD BLESS!! :)

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  7. good good......keep on writting @ waiting!! turn ll come .........

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  8. more 4m writer pavi plssssssssssssssss........ :)

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  9. Is dis a real story pavi...??/

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  10. très bonne. Je l'aime!...:)

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  11. Nice Pavi, never knew you had such skills of emoting on paper with words.. good work.. simple and effective. Tell me when u put up ur next post.. i wanna read that as well :)

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  12. Nice one pavi!! :) where was the blogger in u hidden all these years!! :P

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  13. ...well written....a hint of irony,makes the whole piece more crisp.gud work pavi

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  14. i was jus readng it the third time because it seems very real and so passionate. great stuff!!!

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  15. I really liked it...brought a tear too. I would love to see something more happier the next time :) Good Luck.
    Oh once again, I loved it. Great work!

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  16. hey pavi...its really beautiful!! i guess everyone of us have experienced a part of this at some point of our lives....
    keep writin!!!

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  17. very well written...superb!!

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  18. excellent!!!....nvr knew tis side of u...a fact of life vry well put up in black and white...gr8 work...waiting 4 sm more gr8 work 4m u...keep going...:)

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  19. i was here, i was here... i guess it was a problem wit da network...

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  20. Where were you when I was burned and broken .. i duno wt 2 tell gal .. wonderfully expressed and I guess ds is close to the reality .. im soor most of us experienced it .. ds really means a lot .. a very gud tought WHERE ARE YOU ? sumfn i keepn askn .. itzz awsum ive noo wrds ..
    keep the gud wrk ..
    I would luv 2cu writn sumfn mre .. but keep me posted gal
    Tc ..

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  21. very well executed pavi... so simple yet so true. I am sure all of us can relate to this.. keep on the great work..

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  22. lovely pavi !!!!!! soo simple, soo touchin n very beautifully expressed. m sure evry1 who read this could relate themselves to it, which i believe is very very imp. keep up the gud work swtz. n yeah wer ws this talent, wer ws this talent ????

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  23. good job pavi. . .crouching tiger hidden dragon inside u eh ??!! wonderful work. . .

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  24. Beautiful..........quite touching .....good work pavi :)

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  25. Awesome work Pavi...Really touching..keep up the good work..

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  26. Excellent work Mary.. very true indeed..

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